Where
the Lowell Winds Blow
Like no other
place on Earth
The wind blows
strong in Lowell.
In winter,
a blast chill grips
the face.
In summer,
a gentle breeze gives
a cool relief.
Like the wind,
Life blows
strongly.
At times it
causes freezing pains,
Other times it alleviates
the devastating heat.
The wind is
always felt,
But never seen.
No one knows
where the wind blows,
Or where it ends up.
But we know,
The feeling of
right now.
No one ever
knows what the next day holds.
One can only
hope for the best.
But we are never
alone,
As long as we partake
in the journey together.
Like the wind
that choreographs the leaves to dance in autumn,
So should we
dance to life’s changing rhythm.
And though we
know not where life goes
We go where the
Lowell winds blow.
What’s
in a City?
A city.
Is it the
magnificent skyscrapers that reach heavenward?
The high crime
rates,
That make
insecure women clutch their purses?
The hustling and
bustling.
The city that
never sleeps and moves round the clock.
The overcrowded
streets,
The pedestrians
spilling onto the roads.
The smell.
The stench of
pollution and the lack of authentic air.
The lungs scream
out for oxygen,
As poison seeps
through the pores of the body.
At home in
Lowell,
If I close my
eyes, I can hear the city,
I can hear the
ringing of the emergency sirens
every half hour,
in every direction.
If I walk
outside, I can see the city,
The hustling and
bustling of students and workers,
Rushing to get
their work done,
Before the day
runs out.
If I inhale
deeply,
I can smell the
city,
The scent of pollution
That lingers in
Lowell,
Since the days
of the birth of the Industrial Revolution.
If I spread my
arms out wide,
I can feel the
city,
I experience the
wind that blows over the Merrimack river,
If I lift my hands
up high,
It’s almost like
I can touch the city
I can reach up
and beyond,
Just as the city reaches.
What makes a
city a city,
Is that there is
no concept of time.
It never stands
still, and never catches a break.
Time often works
harder and faster than we do.
How can we keep
up?
In Lowell, the
city clock chimes every hour.
Reminding me
that time is still working.
The chimes
vibrate through the air particles,
Rebuking me for
not keeping up with the city.
The
Best Show in Lowell
The best show in
Lowell is one not to be missed,
Without fail the
show goes on every day.
They say the
best things in life are free,
The cost is
nothing to witness this spectacular event.
The cast is phenomenal
because they are all naturally talented,
Their fame
exists all around the world,
It is impossible
for me to reach and touch them,
Because they are
too big and I am too little.
I am not worthy
to be compared to them.
The performance
can be seen from wherever you are,
The best seat in
the house is right near the Merrimack,
With the river
as the moving stage,
And the back
drop always a mix of a red, yellow, orange tinge.
If you listen
carefully, you can hear the sound effects team,
Performing their
last symphony before they wind down for the day,
And start up again
first thing in the morning.
There’s no business
like show business.
It is the star
of the show that shines the brightest,
Putting on a
performance twice a day with no breaks.
Life is ever changing
in these moments,
But you can
always count on the star to make its grand entrance in the east wing,
And take its
final bow in the west wing.
The river is the
stage and the sky the backdrop,
But the star
steals this magnificent show every time.
It is nature’s extravagant
spectacular and life’s finale,
By far the best
show in Lowell,
Is by the banks of the Merrimack.
The
setting in all three poems originates in Lowell. My personal experiences as a
student and as a resident here in Lowell inspired the theme of each of these
three poems. I used the poem Some Proof
of Love by Jacquelyn Pope from the The
Common Issue No. 9 as the template for my first poem, Where the Lowell Wind Blows. My interpretation of the meaning and
the theme of Pope’s poem is that it talks about the continuation of life. Life
never stops or waits for you because it continues on without a moment’s pause.
Pope goes on to say towards the end of the poem that the beauty of life and of
the past is the people that you share life’s journey with. Our loved ones help
us to continue on life’s path. I used this interpretation of Pope’s poem to
compose my Lowellian reproduction of Some
Proof of Love. I really liked how Pope uses the element of leaves to
contribute to the theme of the poem. The first thing I noticed when I came to
Lowell was that it was a very windy place. I decided to use that observation as
the the core motif in my poem. My poem essentially used the wind as a metaphor
to signify the unpredictable path of life. Just like the wind, we can always
predict where the wind came from and where it is going but we are never certain
of the path of the wind. However, despite life’s unpredictability, it is our
loved ones around us that help us endure our fickle lives.
My
second poem, What’s in a City? was
based on the poem The City by Bruce
Bond from The Common Issue No. 7. My
understanding of the author’s message was that in this world, we become so busy
in our day to day lives, that we often miss the little things in life. The
storm forces the girl in the poem to stay inside and observe the things of the
city that she had never before noticed. In her daily routine, she is always in
a rush and misses all the simple things in the city. However, the stormy day
causes her to pause and reflect on the city. I really liked the idea of
reflection on the city. I decided to write my poem using my observations about
the city of Lowell using the five senses. To me personally, the main
characteristic of any city is the concept of time. Time always seems to be running
out in the city. People are always trying to do so much in so little time.
The
third Lowellian poem was a reproduction of the poem The First Last Light in the Sky by Rowan Riccardo Phillips from The Common Issue No. 9. Phillips’ poem
is essentially describing a sunset. This poem is filled with lots of imagery
and paints a vivid picture in the reader’s head of what a sunset looks like. The
author creates a paradox because the last light of the sun during the sunset is
also the first light during a sunrise. One part of the poem that I found the
most interesting was that the author describes mix feelings of “song and pain”
(Phillips, Line 3). He describes the intense emotion as he watches the sun go
down. He approaches the description as if this was the first and last time he
would see the sunset. The message of the poem as I understood it was that even
though nature repeats, it is best observed in the moment. One can really
appreciate the beauty of the sunset if viewed as a one-time spectacular event.
I also decided to use this theme to describe the sunset in Lowell. I believe
that one of the most beautiful places to see the sunset in Lowell is by the
Merrimack River. The sun just drops below the river and it is a magnificent
sight to see everyday. I decided to take a different approach to describe the
sunset. I used a theatrical show as a metaphor for the sunset and used a lot of
theatrical elements to describe natural characteristics. Even though the sunset
occurs everyday without fail, it should be observed as if it is a once in a
lifetime opportunity.
Fiona,
ReplyDeleteGreat work here. Have you experienced a Lowell winter yet? If not, that chilling winter wind that you write about is going to be more intense than perhaps you described it. There's something vicious about that wind in winter. But great work, nevertheless, on the interpretation of the poems and the work they inspired you to create! 10/10